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Chief_Adviser
Number of posts : 615
Age : 41
City/Town : in ur heart .
Registration date : 2008-06-10
 |  Subject: bangla NEW poem for all user by CHIEF_ADVISER  Sun Jul 06, 2008 4:28 pm | |
| নিরব , আকাশ , সোহেল ছোরা
টাকা পয়সা ঢেলে ,
গুতা মেরে পুলের লাঠি
নোংরা খেলা খেলে ।
মহান পুরুষ মানুষ ভাই
আপডেট করে কথাছ্যাট ,
নজরুল ভাই আর সুইটিকে সাথে নিয়ে
মুক্ত করবেন ছিপাবাজ ।
রিদম , পলক আর রকি জুটি
মানবতার ধারক বাহক ,
সুযোগ বুজে নষ্ট করে
কথাছ্যাট এর স্পেশাল গ্রাহক ।
আরও অনেক ছোর আছে
কোনটা রেখে কোনটা ধরি ,
শুধু দাগী কয়েকটাকে নিয়ে আমি
কবিতা শুরু করি ।
পরে লেখব আরও অনেক কবিতা
সু্যোগ পেলে পড়ে নিও ,
ভাল একটু লাগলে পড়ে
একটু উওসাহ দিও ।
হে সুন্ধর কথাছ্যাট , , আমার না পাওয়া সব কষ্টগুলো কুত্তসিত করে আমাকে , হয়ত এই পৃথিবী ছেড়ে আমাকে একদিন চলে যেতে হবে শুধু তোমার জন্য ।
লেখক ......
মোঃ কবিরুল হাসান ভুইয়া (বাদল)
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HiTleR
Number of posts : 48
Registration date : 2008-06-11
| | Subject: Re: bangla NEW poem for all user by CHIEF_ADVISER Mon Jul 07, 2008 12:48 am | |
| wow.......nice but you need to change the font. | |
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Sakeeba
Number of posts : 10
Registration date : 2008-06-16
| | Subject: Re: bangla NEW poem for all user by CHIEF_ADVISER Mon Jul 07, 2008 10:32 am | |
| Its a unreadble poem. Write in English please. | |
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Rude
Number of posts : 7
Registration date : 2008-06-16
| | Subject: Re: bangla NEW poem for all user by CHIEF_ADVISER Mon Jul 07, 2008 10:59 am | |
| It is hard to understant what you ariting. could you please avoid wrinting anything in other language. write in english only. we have been invited to come and use this forum board. so we will request every one not tio post anything that others can understand.
Thank you | |
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Maxell
Number of posts : 8
Registration date : 2008-06-16
| | Subject: Re: bangla NEW poem for all user by CHIEF_ADVISER Mon Jul 07, 2008 11:12 am | |
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HiTleR
Number of posts : 48
Registration date : 2008-06-11
| | Subject: Re: bangla NEW poem for all user by CHIEF_ADVISER Tue Jul 08, 2008 5:26 pm | |
| ADVISER BHAI
apner kobita te eta amar second feedback. apnara kobira mile ekta cd bahir koren. amra kinbo. | |
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Chief_Adviser
Number of posts : 615
Age : 41
City/Town : in ur heart .
Registration date : 2008-06-10
| | Subject: Re: bangla NEW poem for all user by CHIEF_ADVISER Tue Jul 08, 2008 8:10 pm | |
| who so ever have any comment on this poem I thanks to all of them , i wrote this poem in bangla , the reason behind it is here maximum of us is bangali , and bangla is our Mother langues , if i wrote this poem in english it will be cheating to my Mother langues .... so I am extremly sorry for not to publish this poem in English...If any 1 of u unable to read or understand my poem wrote in bangla , i promise that i'll publish again another poem in Engish ,,,,Thanks .
MANY MANY THANKS TO ALL FOR JOIN WITH US . | |
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pollock
Number of posts : 37
Age : 39
City/Town : Unitd Kingdom
Registration date : 2008-06-10
| | Subject: Re: bangla NEW poem for all user by CHIEF_ADVISER Tue Jul 08, 2008 8:33 pm | |
| great kobitaa hala CHapabaz nijer kotha kichu likhe na kali onner ta niya chinta kore Anyway keep it up mor bless allways with you | |
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HiTleR
Number of posts : 48
Registration date : 2008-06-11
| | Subject: Re: bangla NEW poem for all user by CHIEF_ADVISER Tue Jul 08, 2008 8:45 pm | |
| Thiki bolsen pollock vai. kobitate manush ke mohan bola hoise. ei manush ta ke? tar shate ektu dekha korte hoi je. | |
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RiDoM86
Number of posts : 183
Age : 38
City/Town : KSA
Registration date : 2008-06-10
| | Subject: Re: bangla NEW poem for all user by CHIEF_ADVISER Wed Jul 09, 2008 8:41 am | |
| BMW nice ... Jakkas ekta kobita liksen. boro bhalo laglo. | |
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Chief_Adviser
Number of posts : 615
Age : 41
City/Town : in ur heart .
Registration date : 2008-06-10
| | Subject: Re: bangla NEW poem for all user by CHIEF_ADVISER Sat Jul 12, 2008 7:12 pm | |
| HI salam and thanks to all for join with us , anyway ------ kobitatey kawkey choto kora / opomani kora hoynai , jey jey tiper lok takey oi jagay rakha hoyechey . arr kobitatey amar naam na lekhar karon holo ami aponader moto na , buzlen pollok / rdm saheb ? lol lol lol | |
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